Essay Proposal

I have decided to write about my experience going to Hawaii this summer but in a more general sense. I will include the characters of myself as well as the group I went with but will also include secondary characters such as our tour guide for the trip and people we met along the way. I want to focus on differences between here and there, such as the different cultural experiences I had there and the different people and things to see and experience there. Overall I want to include dialogue to work on my use of it in my pieces and vidid imagery to try to convey the beauty that I saw while I was there. I think my biggest struggle will be to connect the different pieces of the trip together to make a piece that makes sense though it won't be one chronological story.