Final Proposal

For my final piece, I would like to describe a trip that I took this summer with my entire extended family on my father's side to Breckenridge, particularly a day when we went white water rafting. This story would explore the physical struggles and joys of an adventurous task as well as the way it united my family, and the overall beauty of Colorado. I have a large family and so it is hard to find things on a vacation that everyone is excited about, and this activity did so in a unique way so I am looking forward to writing about it.