I appreciate the clear differences in the two versions of "Station Island." I think I prefer the second version. The first version is much denser and reads slower. The perspective change is what made the difference in pacing, I think. Having the narrative be in the first person made it more relatable and thus more engaging for a wider range of readers.
One simple question I have is: Do you intend to develop this much more, or is this first-person narrative very close to the version you envision?
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